Hey check this sample song i made.

Yo, just made this sample of my first english rap song.
Quality is pretty poor due to no free time to get a muffler for my actual mic so im using a shitty 5 bucks one.
Check it out, give feedback.
Im sick and my fucking wisdom tooth is coming out and im workin all week, but no time to waste time so i made this piece. Dont bother givin' me a low ball, go hardcore, no mercy.

Instrumental: Mobb Deep - Survival of the fittest.
Lyrics:
Yo.

Here it is, some fuckin' real talk.
If you wanna learn success, you gotta' start at it broke.
Sort trough your bullshit, meet alot of folks.
No need for lyin' dont be actin' like a dork.

When your moment comes, trust me you gonna know.
Theres no other choice but to get up and go.
This where i ended up makin' shit explode.
Heavy rhymes, and a wack ass Papa Doc flow.

Ain't gonna stop untill my enterprise grow.
Grindin' and hustlin' like theres no tomorrow.
And i didn't drop my soul, dont need the money, fuck the fame.
Dont want people sayin' my name, gotta keep it low.
Lurkin in the shadows, not wasting time for petty battles and rivals.

Always rappin', at home, on the stage.
I love what im doin', and it keeps me engaged.
Doin' what im doin' to keep down the rage.
Because you and me both we livin' in a cage.
Just names on a bureaucrats page.
Livin' like a slave with a minimal wage.

One day i said enough's enough.
Told them ill do anything they call it a bluff.
So now im sittin' on alot'a fuckin' "stuff".
There were alot of times that i almoust got cuffed.

From the start i knew, the pigs tryin'a keep me down.
3 of them holdin' me down to the ground now?
While a forth ones searchin' for a kilo or a pound.
Too smart for em', it was never found.

P.S. If anyone wants to use a rhyme, section or the entire thing in anything to promote, diss or unrelated at all with me can do so freely without having to mention me.