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Happy news! JB_greybrick [Map Return]

Discussion in 'Maps' started by Moofinz/Vetrova/PluM, Apr 19, 2017.

  1. Moofinz/Vetrova/PluM
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    NEW VERSION >>>3<<< DOWNLOAD:
    http://gamebanana.com/maps/195151

    -Fixed football bug, now respawns each goal

    [Reason for new update is because there was slight issue, I had copied someones work, though not intentionally, it was just to get some functions working because I couldn't get the right stuff to work, so instead of copying the logics and entities i copied most of the brushes and style, i've gone back and only copied the logics and how things work. It is now all properly made by me]


    So a while ago I posted a progress of a JB map I worked on. I accidentally reset my PC without saving my files, losing the map. Although now i've remade it and im going to release it very soon. Its 95% done, few fixes need to be done and a better skybox is needed. I will be releasing it tomorrow, i'll add the link here:). Hopefully people will like it. It's small, but compact. There are also plenty of secrets, one that even changes game-play dramatically for CTs.
    Map includes:
    -bhop
    -Race
    -Climb [3 different levels]
    -strafe [3 different levels]
    -skipping rope [Copied alot of assets/entities from hello map]
    -4 corners
    -colour game/simon says
    -wipeout [Copied alot of assets from spy map]
    -football/dodgeball [Copied alot of assets/entities from spy map]

    [first JB map so don't expects TONS of games =D]

    Here are some images of it:


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    Hope you like!
     
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    Looking good! Can't wait to try it :)
     
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    Map now released! Hope to test out game play with others soon. - Download at the top of the original post.
     
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    Just tried the map with my brother ,
    Good things :-
    *Cells auto open
    *Doors don't kill you
    *Games close to each other so easy and quick to command
    *Skipping rope can be used as shot for shot
    *No guns in cells (but can be taken by going in vent)

    suggestions :-
    *Climb is a little hard i guess (my opinion) (could only complete green and orange one ) and you can die if you fall from top even if u have 100 hp
    *there are a lot of places where you can get weapon from
    *The bhop is damn too hard , when those platforms go down your speed is literally wasted
    *There are some secrets where you can not get to (i couldn't find any way) , at least like 4

    Bugs ( which i found ) :-
    *if you spam the climb buttons the different climbs get mixed
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    *Walls of cells are not attached
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    *Minor gap in skipping rope
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    It is a good map i would say looks easy to command but looks easy to rebel too :clap::clap:
     
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    How can you pass this off as your work? Most of the map is just copy and pasted from other maps. I especially find it funny how you don't give any credit to any of the maps that you stole content from. Do you honestly think no one would see you stealing games from one of the most popular maps? This doesn't deserve to be added to the server at all, it isn't your work.

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    I'm also guessing that you copy and pasted the bhop from vipinthemix also as it is the crappy version of bhop which doesn't work with the JB bhop settings. The race is also from jb_hello but you have added another two layers to it so I suspose you have sort of made it your "own". The only two games which I can see that haven't been copy and pasted is strafe and climb, but I don't even believe that you made them now.
     
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    yeah okay, I copied a bit too much I admit, apologies. I copied the brushes and stuff when really i should of only copied the logics and entities, ill remake those parts. [Football, skipping rope and wipeout]. Being genuine tho, bhop and race I had made my self and everything else.
    --- Double Post Merged, Apr 20, 2017, Original Post Date: Apr 20, 2017 ---
    Updated + fixed.
     
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    Map added now the changes have been made.
     
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    v3 Updated. - Fixed football. V3 is current version.
     
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    Version 3 added and renamed jb_mspaint
     
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    I think this map has potential to be very popular but some things could be tweeked to make it more fun.

    - 2 vent cells makes it very hard to command as a CT. I suggest setting it to random 1 out of the 2 every round.
    - Deagles are very powerful in CSS. The Ts can get hold of a deagle too easy. I would swap the deagles for a USP, P228 UMP or Glock.
    - The pool seems like a good place to run off from the CTs but nothing is in there to rebel with.. you just run away in there and die. I would add a vent or gun in there. Eg http://oi63.tinypic.com/9b9m6b.jpg
    - I know the map is called greybrick but I think a better texture can be used for the walls to make the map brighter and prettier.
    - Seen a few players get confused by climb door. Its hard to see in the dark. Maybe a frame for the door? http://oi67.tinypic.com/2nstk0p.jpg

    Of course its just my opinion and someone else might think differently.
     
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    @Steezy there is a one time usable teleporter in pool on the left side in the bottom you need to press E on it and you will be telorted to the place in pool where you can get mp5
     
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    Its not a 1 time usable. Thats the race secret. But yeah, thankyou for the feedback, helps a lot. Most of it i will work on, i might think about the pool vent one though. I'll also try make some better textures for the walls. May take some time though for v4 to come out, got a lot of things im wanting to change.
     
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    If there is already a gun in pool then the vent I suggested isn't needed as much.
     
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